Re: unnoticed

Wendy — Thu, 23 Nov 2006 16:25:23 -0000

Fantastic poem. I really like when you say:

the pipes are mended
and the skin is restored
leaving only a small scar
that will fade in time.

gloria — Mon, 20 Nov 2006 16:23:06 -0000

awesome metaphor, daniel. i like it a whole lot.

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