http://revjim.disqus.com/enThu, 23 Nov 2006 16:25:23 -0000http://revjim.net/2006/11/20/unnoticed/#comment-4224506<p>Fantastic poem. I really like when you say:</p><p>the pipes are mended<br>and the skin is restored<br>leaving only a small scar<br>that will fade in time.</p>WendyThu, 23 Nov 2006 16:25:23 -0000http://revjim.net/2006/11/20/unnoticed/#comment-4224505<p>awesome metaphor, daniel. i like it a whole lot.</p>gloriaMon, 20 Nov 2006 16:23:06 -0000